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Tuesday, June 1, 2021

Final Draft - Descriptive Writing - My Mum

20/05/2021

WALT to write a description of our mum using precise words to create an image in our readers minds.

My Mum Bryoney  

I'm going to tell you about my mum Bryoney. She has beautiful  brown eye. her hair couler is like damp bark.  She has black and light grey hair that goes past her Every day she wears her beautiful dresses and wonderful earrings. Her hair goes past her  ears. She always wears her black and brown shoes. Mum is medium sized.

On the weekends  she sometimes goes for  lovely walks in the morning. She likes paddle boarding at  beautiful Lake Ngatu and she loves gardening. She likes king to her friends while me and my friends play. She helps me train for  events like the triathlon and for small events. Sometimes we clean the windows together and bake yummy cakes. Mum takes me to swimming lesson and soccer training and big soccer games. She makes me feel proud after every soccer game and always takes me to the park and the cafe. Mum likes doing the dishwasher with me. My mum is the best because she is loving, kind and helpful. 



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